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Writing 101, Day Three: 3 songs & Commit to a Writing Practice

Writing 101, Day Three: Commit to a Writing Practice

Write about the three most important songs in your life — what do they mean to you? … Today’s twist: You’ll commit to a writing practice. …

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I’m as close to committing to a writing practice as I’m going to get. And I don’t see how writing about three songs has anything to do with the committment to writing for fifteen minutes a day. A twist of the imagination? [added later – oh yes, talking blogging writing habit ]

First song, my all time favourite is America’s “A Horse With No Name”.

I was a young mother with two very young children when this song came out. Though who knows, it could have been out for ages before it filtered on the 3HA’s playlist. (Hamilton, Victoria) It resonated with me, particularly the line ‘for there aint no-one to give you no pain’. At the time I was deep in denial that I had made a big mistake by getting married. I kept telling myself just as well I never acted on my instinct to run away before the big day. I would have looked very foolish when I later discovered I was pregnant. Two weeks, by my reckoning, on the big day. I don’t think I would have been able to bring myself to have an abortion, but I probably would have. We had lots of girls going through the Mt Gambier hospital for D & C’s, took me some time to realise what was going on! But then I have always been naïve. It’s taken me decades to work some things through in my head, to find what happened was different to what I thought was happening at the time. I don’t know if that makes sense. [sigh]

My second song is more recent. I fell in love with “Miss Murder” by AFI. I think the film clip influenced me – I KNOW the film clip influenced me. I just loved the whole drama of it. My favourite line is when he (Billy? Davey) sings about reaching for the golden ring that was promised and sings something like, “Will he let you get your filthy hands upon it”, which I take to mean will God let you get what you want. On second thought, I might love the growl in his throat during the rabbit scene. In the  cd the prelude and Miss Murder are separate tracks, the video long version has both. (see at end for the video)

And I just cannot think of a third favourite song, my music tastes are diverse. I can say I love certain songs, but if I don’t have the record then I don’t love them enough … oh, gee, how could I forget …  Meatloaf  and ‘Bat Out Of Hell’ the title track. I was introduced to Meatloaf and Alice Cooper, both, during a party at the home of Mr Ex’s close friend. (The one I came too close to myself, eventually)  [oops, wrong party]

Many years later, my Mr R and I saw Alice Cooper in concert in Melbourne at the tennis centre, and when I first saw him I surprised myself by leaping to my feet and screaming! It came from no-where and was completely unexpected, never happened at Bob Dylan or even Tex Perkins. Most of the concert I think I had my mouth hanging open, but I can’t really say I love Alice Cooper’s songs over any of the others I have named, especially this Meatloaf.

I haven’t been watching the time, but who cares. I have written this out pretty quick without really thinking about the three choices I made. Now I will polish up, and track down utube films to embed, etc. You can choose if you listen, or not. Oh, I will also check the lyrics on the lines I’ve quoted, for accuracy. Don’t want to look too stupid.

And then I’m going to pop my Miss Murder single in the player, watch the video and blast my eardrums. I think it’s my favourite. You know, I have no idea what I said at number one now [scrolls up] oh yes, …. ummmm…

Long version

Yes, Miss Murder is my favourite.  🙂

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Writing 101, Day Two: A View

A piece of writing for the Writing 101 challenge – I am trying to relate all challenges to my novel. This is a new scene which may or may not stay. If it does, it precedes what I have written so far. 🙂 Of course, I am days behind in the challenge.

Writing 101, Day Two: A View

Today, choose a place to which you’d like to be transported if you could — and tell us the backstory. How does this specific location affect you? Is it somewhere you’ve been, luring you with the power of nostalgia, or a place you’re aching to explore for the first time?

Today’s twist: organize your post around the description of a setting.
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Love gave Jarryd new eyes.

He couldn’t remember the view ever looking quite this good.

Amusement drifted through the mindpath, and he felt a rumbling laugh vibrating under him. Jarryd patted the dragon’s green neck, grinning to himself. It would take more than his dragon laughing at him to stop his thoughts turning to the girl waiting for him back in Skerby.

He could see his stepfather’s keep ahead, the stone glistening high on the seaward side where the sea pummelled past on its sweep over the rocky island.

Below him the estuary opalised. Blues, grays and yellows, amid swathes of brightly coloured algae, twisted and writhed as the waters ran out to feed the salty behemoth eagerly awaiting beyond.

Jarryd glanced back behind him, tracing the path of the largest river as far as he could see. He couldn’t see the Great Waterfall, but he knew it was there, with its mists clinging, climbing, hanging over the mills and houses lining the shores below. Above the waterfall, he could see the waters of Lake Turras glinting, a vast inland sea, to the foot of the mountains blurring the horizon.

He sighed as he turned to look at his destination: almost home. The view seemed to darken.

He dreaded his mother’s reaction to his news.

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Writing 101, Day One: Unlock the Mind

To get started, let’s loosen up. Let’s unlock the mind. Today, take twenty minutes to free write. And don’t think about what you’ll write. Just write.

Keep typing (or scribbling, if you prefer to handwrite for this exercise) until your twenty minutes are up. It doesn’t matter if what you write is incomplete, or nonsense, or not worthy of the “Publish” button.

And for your first twist? Publish this stream-of-consciousness post on your blog.

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Twenty minutes starts now. What will I write about? During the lead up to this Writing 101 challenge, I thought I might focus the exercises on my characters from my work-in-progress as a means of coming up with something relevant to write about instead of having twenty days of all completely different stuff.  Oh shit … I forgot to write down the time … twenty minutes starts now [writing down 5.03] and okay, I’ve already started … where was I? … oh yes, talking about my characters.
They are almost real people to me, though I don’t know what they really did before my story started, not when they were kids, and I don’t know how they are going to end up by the end of my trilogy or whatever I end up writing. I know what my main girl is going to do … to an extent.

Gee, twenty minutes is a lot time when you are going to write stream of consciousness. I have that book by Julia Cameron (?) Artist’s Way, I used to do the morning pages as suggested. I never actually worked my way through all the set of exercises in the book. But I do believe if you leap, a net will appear.

That ties in with my believe in synchronicity [the news is on and I will try to stop pricking up my ears as that  man’s name is mentioned! — I’ve sworn off politics on my blog for at least a week … and oh no, I’ll have to go look … time is 5.09 … okay, back, sorry about that, bloody idiot, I’m almost tempted to vote for bloody Palmer’s party next time, just to annoy shit out of everyone!. And if I’m going to keep talking like this I am going to change my rating up from G.

I’m … no, not going to apologize again. I’ll dribble on, and if there is anyone who hasn’t wandered off in disgust by now, thanks for sticking with me this far.

Who says I’m not taking this task seriously? I know I’m supposed to forget (as if) that this is going to be posted on my blog. How many people are going to post without tidying up? Will I edit and polish this crap. Will I spell check. Will I just skip this exercise completely? Too right I will… errr … no. [5.14] Oh gee [runs fingers of left hand back through hair — Terry Goodkind’s hero does that a lot, but maybe with the other hand]  Oops, deviated somewhat.

5.15 … ummm, am I exaggerating? only a little. My mind is going blank. I was going to talk about my WIP characters. I don’t buy very many books, but I have all of … [mental block, the old memory is failing ] … Richard … and Kahlan’s adventures. I love those books and probably read them twice a year. [5.17]

I should type slower, bit late to think of that now! Mind blank. Mind blank, mind blank, blankety blanks, never watched that show. I know I’m not going to impress anyone with my witty style but I’m trying my best, I’m being a smart arse. Ooops, did I say that? See, this is exactly what happens when you do stream of consciousness, all these truths appear among the dross, stuff comes out you didn’t even know you were thinking. [5.19]

I will have to edit because I cannot type properly, there are spaces in the middle of words, words are run together … 5.20 … what time did I start … scroll up and look … 5.03. Well I started a little before that so I guess I need not worry about the time away for the quick look at the telly, but I forgot to write the time I came back down anyway, so I’ll forget that. I’m going red with embarrassment when I read this tomorrow, maybe I better stop now.

Big breaths. 5.22, a minute to go. Umm … errr … I hope you enjoyed my …. 5.23!!!

Well, that’s all folks.
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(Spell checked and edited before posting. Left in passive voice and  redundant expression.)

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