Hello people, here ’tis my haiku for Ronovan Write’s Haiku Challenge #83: Gem & Flame.
I’ve used the Haiku in English form ( 5 / 7 / 5 syllables)
The two sentences:
Burning words of love flaming like gems of heartsblood.
Flaming like gems of heartsblood, my crushed valentine.
Okay, I admit they aren’t great sentences. 🙂
Image: I photographed this rose on a bed of ash especially for the challenge. I hope I captured the intended ‘feel’ of my haiku.
(Nokia Lumia 520)
Have a good day. 🙂
I can’t get over how velvety the rose petals are. Love the Haiku. Perfect for Valentines. ❤ ❤ ❤
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The flowers on that rose always photograph like velvet. Has a very rich scent, too. Thanks for commenting Tess.
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Beautiful blossom.
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Great picture! Good haiku. 🙂
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Thank you, Vashti.
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You’re welcome. 😀 xx
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