Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge #84: Milk & Smooth
As usual, I’m using Haiku in English Form (5 / 7 / 5 syllables) for Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku challenge. I’m using this weeks words, as is: milk & smooth. I tossed around various ideas, but kept coming back to chocolate.
The two sentences …
Divinely smooth milk chocolate pleasures the tongue.
Chocolate pleasures the tongue and wrinkles the bum.
The opposites are smooth and wrinkled, though I’m really thinking smooth and bumpy. I thought of using dumpy derriere but ran out of syllables. Unspoken ecstasy and agony come into play, too, do you think? 😮
Image: The remains of a chocolate bunny (2015, FujiFilm FinePix A607 digital camera). For the haiku, I have cropped and ‘exploded’ the image in IrfanView, and added the text boxes in Faststone.
Do have a good weekend. ❤
Hilarious! Awesome!
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. 😀
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Wonderfully entertaining Haiku, Christine. Now I know why I don’t eat chocolate.
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Glad you were entertained, Tess. 🙂
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Your Haiku are lovely. ❤
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Make sure to check out the review tomorrow. 🙂
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Oh-oh, what are you up to?
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Ha Ha! Loved this so funny 🙂
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😀 Thanks Judy.
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Love your witty haiku, Christine. Yes, ‘unspoken ecstasy and agony’ are definitely factors in chocolate indulgence. I tend to ignore the agony. My Christmas chocolate lasted for over a month (a little daily nibble), but now I’m getting withdrawal symptoms. Ha ha!
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I’ve done that, a little at a time. I once kept Christmas chocolates in the fridge unopened for a whole year. And this year I passed some on as a gift to someone else. Still, a lot managed to pass my lips. I haven’t much will power. Anyway, a little chocolate every day is really good for you. I think it’s a proven fact, depending on the type of chocolate. Thanks for commenting Olga. Hope you get some nice chockies for Easter.
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Oh, yes! Easter goodies!
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If you get lots, you can stretch them out for ages. ❤
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I find that with Halloween candy and chocolates. I always buy more than needed and it lasts almost forever. Ha ha!
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Ha, ha! Great haiku! I better slow down on the chocolate, huh. 😉
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Glad you got a laugh. 😀
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Heehee! Roll on Easter!💚💙💛💜❤️
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